Tom Crean (Terra Nova Centenary) Storyboard

This is the most recent storyboard in my current project (Still in it's early stages). The story focuses on the 35 mile solo march by Tom Crean to save the lives of Bill Lashly and Teddy Evans. I thought, might as well post something, but also maybe for some feedback on the narrative so far and any suggestions which might improve it. The text used is from actual first hand accounts by the three men involved. As i mentioned please give any suggestions.

Tom Crean (Terra Nova Centenary)

On this day 19^th of February in 1912 at around 3.30am Tom Crean completed a 35 mile solo march to Hut Point, Antarctica, to save the lives of Edward Evans and William Lashly. Both Crean and Lashly (Who stayed to look after Evans) were awarded an Albert medal. Crean had walked for 18 hours with only a bar of chocolate and three biscuits to sustain him. An inspiring example of human endurance and perseverance. So in line with my current project i did this little impulsive sketch as a tribute. To Mr Tom Crean. (More work to come)